Throughout this weeks blog post, I will be attempting to use the semicolon and dash correctly. I choose to test these out because I want to start incorporating them into my writing for other classes.
Both Grammar Alive! and Christensen talk about the concept of Standard English being thought of as the correct way to use English; Both explain that the concept of Standard English being correct is wrong [two closely connected sentences joined by a semicolon]. There is this belief out there that if a person does not speak or write in Standard English, they are from a lower class and are not as smart as those who do use Standard English. Teachers who believe this are contributing to the cultural deficit model; people from different cultures are believed to be not as smart as those from cultures that speak and write Standard English [two closely connected sentences joined by a semicolon]. Grammar Alive! discusses that there is no right or wrong English. Throughout chapter one and two, one of the main points was that language varies across time, situation, and people. As a teacher, it is important to understand this concept. People come from different cultural backgrounds and have different ways of communicating; their home speak can be very different from Standard English [two closely connected sentences joined by a semicolon]. Christensen states, "When more attention is paid to the way something is written or said than to what is said, students' words and thoughts become devalued." It is important when teaching grammar to focus on what is being said and understand that how they say it may be from their home speak or cultural language-which is not wrong [emphasize a point using a dash].
A teacher may want to use code-switching as a tool in the classroom for students to learn the difference between Standard English and other ways of speaking, like home speak. Code-switching is when a person speaks or writes in more than one way; for example a person could be speaking Standard English and then code-switch to African American language [two closely connected sentences joined by a semicolon]. Students could take turns being the one to speak in Standard English, which will help them learn. Grammar Alive! discusses this concept and also says that conversation allows for grammatical discovery. Also during this exercise, it would be beneficial for a teacher to explain that language is situational and Standard English is appropriate in some situations, while home speak would be completely appropriate in others. Christensen states, "As teachers, we have daily opportunities to affirm that our students' lives and language are unique and important." This is one of the most important things I have learned through Grammar Alive! and the Christensen article-a teacher should not allow their students' to think that Standard English is the only correct way to speak and write [emphasize a point using a dash]. In other words, Christensen sums it up perfectly what teachers' should keep in mind while teaching grammar: "...we need to equip them [students] to question an educational system that devalues their lives and their knowledge" [ I know this was not the pattern of the week, but I saw these patterns in authentic text and couldn't help but experiment, so I attempted brackets when adding context in a direct quote and a colon to introduce a quote].
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteWhat you wrote about was closely related to what I wrote. I agree with the fact that the focus should be on what the person has said and not necessarily how they said it; this implies that home-speak or cultural language is not wrong. I agree completely with the fact that Standard English and home speak are situational. I think that teachers need to emphasize this and make sure that students understand the difference.
I think that you have the semicolon use down. In my head I separated the sentences to see if they were sentences or not and if they made sense and all of them worked. One thing I noticed is your used of the dash. The dash is used to emphasize a point which I can see the intent in your sentence but I think I would have used parentheses. The sentence I’m talking about it the “…say it may be from their home speak or cultural language-which is not wrong”. I can see that you what to emphasize that what people are teaching is wrong but how the dash is used I almost think it’s more of a side note which is what parenthesis would be for.
An example of a semicolon you could have used would be “Also during this exercise, it would be beneficial for a teacher to explain that language is situational; Standard English is appropriate in some situations, while home speak would be appropriate in others”. I edited the and out because in most instances where there is an “and” you can usually put some sort of punctuation. Also, the sentences were very closely related.
All in all I really liked what you had to say,
Allyson